Opinion Essay : People should go to the zoos or shouldn't ? - Lifeguard Fish

Opinion Essay : People should go to the zoos or shouldn't ?


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opinion essay about zoo 


           

Opinion essay about Zoo  'Many zoos are inhumane and people shouldn't go the zoos" Agree or Disagree.  

                                        
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    There are many zoos in the world and they have any kind of animal. Animals live in there and they are fed by an employee of zoos. They have required things for a living but everything isn't there. They aren't social and they don't feel safe. Also, many people annoy them. I strongly believe that many zoos are inhumane and people shouldn't go to the zoos for these reasons.

    First of all, when animals live in their habitat, they become social because there are some kinds of animals in their habitat but there are generally one or two animals that are the same kind in zoos. They do the same thing every day. This statement is very bad. Animals that in this statement usually become stressed because they are alone every day and they live in a small space.
    Furthermore, many people, especially children, annoy animals. They are trying to scare animals with stone or wood. Also if animals inside a cage, they scream to an animal for scaring it. Also, people feed animals with their junk food but this food harmful to animals.
    To summarize, zoos aren't good for animals.İf we don't go to zoos. We help them because of the popularity of the zoo decrease by the day. Animals should live in their habitat with their kind. They mustn't hump by people. Therefore, zoos are terrible and people shouldn't go to prison in the zoo.

                                     

How to write 5 paragraph opinion essay ? 



This part for English students How to write opinion essay? I write step by step and If you follow these order I hope you will not have a problem about opinion essay. Also, If you want to add something about opinions essay please write a comment.

Firstly, you should read this opinion essay example and try to understand opinion essay structure.

  • First Step:

you should deceive that you agree or disagree to idea and you prefer outline about why do you agree?
Then, Made outline

 My Opinion essay outline:

- animals aren't social ,
- people annoy animals and animals feel in safe and bad


  • Second Step:

Make a structure. In my opinion,  we should use at least 4 paragraph. Now we Analiese opinion essay paragraphs

Opinion essay First paragraph:

We should write opinion essay topic sentence
Mention reasons shortly :They aren't social and they don't feel in safe.Also many people annoy them
We should write our side : I strongly believe that many zoos are in humane and people shouldn't go to the zoos for these reasons

Opinion essay Second paragraph:
We should start signal world ( first of all , firstly,The first reason is that...)
We should explain our first reason

Opinion essay Third paragraph:
We should start signal world I prefer generally (Furthermore, On the other hand, Secon reason is that)
We should explain our second reason

- Opinion essay Final paragraph:
We should start signal world ( To summarize,To sum up, To conclude, Consequently,...)
This part a little summarize our reasons and end of this paragraph we should write our idea again like Therefore, zoos are terrible and people shouldn't go to prison of zoo

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